This is looking good and coming together nicely.
Just a few edit suggestions for you.
For the title, let’s see if we can break up the long sentence after the product type into key statements:
The key Q I had was, what is the main reason this product is used – is it eyes or skin? I have an example below which prioritizes the eyes first .. but let me know what you think…
EDIT: Ice Globes for Facials – Facial Globes Reduces Puffiness and Dark Circles Around Eyes – Stimulates Collagen Production to Tighten Skin and Shrink Pores – Enhances Circulation and Smooth Looking Skin
Bullets: Each of your bullet sentences, started with ‘ice globes’ or facial ice globes’ which may be a bit repetitive.,
ACHIEVE YOUTHFUL SKIN COMPLEXION: The Facial Ice Globes gently stimulate collagen and blood circulation to reduce signs of aging of fine lines, wrinkles, while also helping to shrink pores and improve a healthier skin tone.
REDUCE PUFFINESS UNDER EYES: To waken tired eyes and get your skin ready for the day, take the Face Globes from the fridge to give you an instant cool beauty treatment that soothes puffy eyes and skin.
RESTORE SKIN’S NATURAL RADIANCE: Whatever your skin type or condition, your set of ice globes will pamper your skin by reducing oiliness, soothing sunburn, tightening skin and if used daily, can repair and regenerate skin cells.
RELIEF FROM SINUS AND HEADACHES: Beyond just beauty, the simulation effects of the stainless steel globes help target muscle tension, relieve stress, smooth migraines, and active lymphatic drainage.
For your final one, see if you can have a go at rewriting this one – key things for you to consider:#
How do you feel with the edits above?
Hey Martin – we can chat about the first two weeks of the launch on Monday, what to expect, what to track and when to take action.
speak to you then.
I have all the answers for you right here 🙂 – we created two SOP’s detailing :
Please see the Resource Vault / REAL Step-by-Step Guides (SOPs) / Biz Set up SOP >>>>- https://members.goteamreal.com/content/biz-set-up-sop/
Hey Jules – both look great.
The angle is great because is a point of difference from everyone else
The only thing that I would change is to make the text black on the turquoise background because white on turquoise is difficult to see.
Did you try the other blue, so that it matches your secondary images too?
Which one do you think stands-out? – on contrast, the image of the guy does actually stand out because of the color, as long as it won’t alienate women?
I think you are good to go Jules 🙂
Great Jules – you’re a talented designer! – love it!!
For the impact
I 100% agree with Kristin – DO NOT dispute the finer details of this trademark, focus on getting this email off to Jenny in order to progress this and hopefully get your listing back as soon as you can.
Follow Kristin’s advice and you will hopefully get this sorted quickly – time is of the essence:
It looks like the first challenge is for you to identify the top 5 benefits of this product.
Would you like to brainstorm those and start there?
At the moment, you have:
The statements above do not convey the emotional benefits or reason someone needs and will love this product.
A great place to start is >>> Listing Optimisation Module >> And going through the ‘REAL Ideal Client and Main Benefits Exercise’
We can help shape them after you have been through this exercise to dig deep into the user benefits.
Great! See you Thursday 🙂
J-Mark Enterprises, LLC may need more than one day to give you a disposal price, but gathering your inventory and costs is a good start.
When you present back your data, present your preferred option so that we can confirm or discuss.
R&D Question from LAZAR – potential request for a poll for brand name (a few selections have not been possible due to USPTO) – https://members.goteamreal.com/forums/topic/my-brand-name/#post-35333
Regan is running the R&D call this week – post below and request a poll from the group – https://members.goteamreal.com/forums/topic/coaching-call-02-dec-post-questions-critiques-below-by-tue-5pm-est/
Then you can collect multiple people’s feedback vs one 🙂
But make sure you check each name in the USPTO first so that you gett excited about a top vote for a name that is not available.
That is strange. I would request a call from SC – ask for the catalogue team – and ask them to explain and help you fix it.
Jo mentioned the advice below for barcode.
But let’s go back to the packaging – this is where you will put yourself in the shoes of the customer and the brand owner:
Looking good! You got a great graphic designer to work on this super fast! 🙂
Hey Verna – advertising for that KW is fine, but they will probably be bidding hard for their own KW.
But when you can, you will remove it from your listing and search terms.
Great – I am glad these read okay to you.
For the tingling :