This is definitely a great start. I have some ideas on the bullet points that may help get some points across with more benefits in mind…see what you think:
First, you won’t need periods at the end of any of the bullets. Small thing, but it helps with indexing the words in Amazon’s algorithm.
Second, I would say that there are very major benefits to the No Chafe and No VPL aside from just not having them…
This is just how I would consider these products to be beneficial to women…I am not the ideal client, and some of the wording may be incorrect here, but can you see how giving a VERY specific benefit up front and then using some reasoning afterwards helps connect a bit more?
At least, I THINK it does. I could be dead wrong, but let me know what you think about these ideas.
The product description is pretty good.
One thing I do think you will have to consider about the Bullet Points and product description is that you ideally do want to have some of the really good keywords like “working out”, “workout”, “underwear”, “under garment”, etc…in them so that you can get better relevancy across the search algorithm.
Great start. Very good stuff.