Thanks Amanda – that’s really helpful feedback. You’re right, I have no idea what it is that appeals to me about ‘pink on blue’! I feel it portrays strong female, in a way? I’ve reworded it to say I like the colours in the brand examples attached, but am open to any suggestions.
Going point too about the snazzy metallic colouring, thanks for pointing that out. I’ve suggested standard pantones along the metallic lines.